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Her world was unbalanced.

She
      s
       t
        u
         m
          bled.
SixWordStories. Prompt: Stumble
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Ebrethil Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Haahahaha xD
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stonedInc Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I stumbled upon this and now I'm really unbalanced about what to write here.
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IggyWillSaveMeIn2012 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2011   Writer
I'm laughing so hard right now...:D
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stonedInc Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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3wyl Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
I feel that you could make this piece somewhat experimental with the structure and the layout of everything.

Perhaps with stumbled... you could emphasise that by separating each letter in the word and making it more trippy by organising it so that letters are .. well, placed differently, I guess? Does that make sense? =/

I like the title and how that gives this piece more context. The phrasing isn't too bad either. :)
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IggyWillSaveMeIn2012 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2011   Writer
I changed it a bit...you like?
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3wyl Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Is it me or can I not see it? O.o
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IggyWillSaveMeIn2012 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011   Writer
I think it's just you...
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3wyl Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
I see it now! That's pretty awesome! :la:
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IggyWillSaveMeIn2012 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011   Writer
Thanks!
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